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14 February 2018 @ 05:28 pm
Less Than Three  
Author: schweet_heart
Title: Less Than Three
Rating: T
Pairing/s: None.
Character/s: Merlin, Balinor, Hunith
Summary: The car engine coughed once, then caught; he heard the sound of beeping as the ancient vehicle was thrown into reverse. He could probably still catch it, if he were fast enough.
Warnings: Divorce and domestic arguments.
Word Count: 280 words.
Prompt: 300 Unkept Promises (Heartbreak Month #2)
Author's Notes: Sorry, Ona.

He heard the sound of raised voices from the top of the stairs—loud enough this time to drown out the music in his earphones, startling him from his mathematics homework. Pausing the track, Merlin listened. His mother’s voice, and then his father’s, the booming baritone filling the house like angry thunder; there was a crash, the slamming of a door and rapid footsteps. Then silence.

The car was starting up outside by the time Merlin made it to the bottom of the staircase, and when he started for the door he was waylaid by Hunith. There were tears in her eyes.

“I’m afraid he’s gone, cariad,” she said, stepping between Merlin and the open doorway. The car engine coughed once, then caught; he heard the sound of beeping as the ancient vehicle was thrown into reverse. He could probably still catch it, if he were fast enough. “It’s over.”

“What are you talking about?” Merlin stepped around her, but she caught his arm, forcing him to face her.

“We’re getting a divorce,” she said, her voice wavering a little on the final word. “Your father’s gone to find himself a hotel. He won’t be coming back.”

Merlin stopped still in his tracks, the kick of his heart turning thick in his throat. “He promised,” he said, aware even as he did so that words were futile. They’d made the decision already; he could see it in his mother’s face. “Let go of me!”

He was out the door in time to see his father’s car disappear around a bend in the road, exhaust fumes rising in the chill autumn air. Shouts wouldn’t reach him now.

He didn’t look back.
 
 
Current Mood: angry
 
 
 
littensmittens: pic#127775127littensmittens on February 14th, 2018 04:36 am (UTC)
W h yyyyyy


(Laughing so hard at the authors note tho)
schweet_heartschweet_heart on February 14th, 2018 10:05 pm (UTC)
Because heartbreak!

lol when I had the idea I was just like, "Ona is gonna hate this" XD
littensmittens: pic#127775127littensmittens on February 14th, 2018 10:09 pm (UTC)
You were right, so I guess I should say “thanks! I hate it!” Lmao

Nothing against your writing of course. You made it painful
schweet_heartschweet_heart on February 14th, 2018 10:10 pm (UTC)
lol cheers ;)
stay_magical: pic#124626564stay_magical on February 14th, 2018 06:44 am (UTC)
Oh no that was not okay. Poor Merlin, poor Hunith. Ugh my heart
schweet_heartschweet_heart on February 14th, 2018 10:08 pm (UTC)
Poor all of them :(
enkiduuen_ki_duu on February 14th, 2018 07:26 am (UTC)
aww this definitely counts as heartbreak. very much so </3 <3 He could probably still catch it, if he were fast enough < this line is soooo lovely and beautiful and heartwrenching, im dying (i vanished for quite some time, but i'm back! yay, i get to catch up on your awesome work~ hope all is well with you <3)
schweet_heartschweet_heart on February 14th, 2018 10:07 pm (UTC)
OMG, Enki!!! Welcome back \o/ I'm good, how are you? :))
enkiduu: 1en_ki_duu on February 16th, 2018 02:07 am (UTC)
Thanks! \o/ i went through a rough patch, but I’m good now :D
schweet_heartschweet_heart on February 16th, 2018 09:11 pm (UTC)
Glad to hear it <3 Hopefully that means we get to read more of your awesome writing sometime soon, yes? No pressure, but I'm looking forward to it :)
ajsrandomajsrandom on February 14th, 2018 07:29 pm (UTC)
Oh wow, poor Merlin! Very heartbreaking. :)
schweet_heartschweet_heart on February 14th, 2018 10:09 pm (UTC)
Definitely a sad situation for Merlin :(
archaeologist_d: Merlin Emrysarchaeologist_d on February 14th, 2018 07:40 pm (UTC)
Oh, poor all of them. So sad.
schweet_heartschweet_heart on February 14th, 2018 10:10 pm (UTC)
Indeed :(